TASK : Technology has made the world a better place to live
Technology is one of the most innovative breakthrough of human beings. Thanks to it, the world is changing dramatically in recent years and our living conditions have been improved. I strongly believe that the advent of technology brings many benefits for society in terms of living standard, education and health problem.
First of all, it is undeniable that our life has improved significantly since technology is invented. These days, most families use modern household items instead of traditional objects and they are pleased with the invention of new technology products. As evidence of this, we cook rice with coal or firewood in many years ago but a large number of people now use cookers more conveniently and quickly. In addition, technology shrinks the gap between countries in the world such as airplane is considered as the safest and most convenient transportation for travelling.
Another reason why technology has an indispensible role in many aspects of our lives is that the treatment methods to dangerous diseases are discovered. According to the World Health Organization, the rate of people died of cancer and other infected diseases, accounting for 85% in 2010. On the other hand, up to now, this figure is gradually decreasing by 50% due to the impacts of technology, scientists researched the best treatments for patients.
In contrast, opponents of this view say that when technology has become more popular, many people are over dependent on it and live passively. They spend most of their time on social networks and forget the real world where they live. However, the opponents ignore the fact that technology provides all people a huge source of knowledge. They can have access to different information for their studying and have more opportunities to advance the understanding about intensive studies. For instance, if people don’t have enough condition to go to the English classes, they can search some free lessons on the Internet to learn.
All things considered, the positive effects of technology contribute to form a brighter world, especially with regard to health, life and education. I am convinced that with the help of technology, we will build up a better planet in the future.
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| 2019-01-17 | duong15cna06 | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 332, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... coal or firewood in many years ago but a large number of people now use cookers more convenientl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, first of all, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20833333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9363502478 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6565690777 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.294117647 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1764705882 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207279543629 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663234352498 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430556678139 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118456035597 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341570418735 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.