As technological innovation brings about rapid changes,retraining becomes a lifelong necessity therefore,industry should take responsibility for education training and retraining of their workers. To what extent do you agree to this idea.
The dynamics of the industrialization have been changed rampantly over the years. Technological innovation plays a pivotal role and leads to rapid changes. In this connection,retraining acts a boon. It is indeed,the responsibility of the industry to provide quality training to the workers.
To begin with,In today's scenario, globalization dramatically changed the working style.An individual must be a multi tasker,if he/she wants to survive in the era of competition. Amalgamation fields lead a person towards a secure future. Of late,it has been seen that private industry completely overtake...
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private industry completely overtake the market.
private industry completely overtakes the market.
a industry must take proactive measures
an industry must take proactive measures
Life and the industrialization are uncertain, one must be ready himself/herself to tackle the uncertainty.
Life and the industrialization are uncertain, so one must be ready himself/herself to tackle the uncertainty.
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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
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Average Word Length: 5.183 4.6
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.579 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.893 7.5
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.055 0.07
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