Technology is being used more and more in education so there will soon be no role for teachers in education? What extent do you agree or disagree?
Today, in light of increasingly developing technology and robots, there is a concern of the necessity of teachers in academic fields. Although some technology advocates support this idea due to the potential replacement, I am against it and will further explain my viewpoint.
It is understandable why the idea of potentiality to replace teachers’ role with robots is generated. First, it is undeniable that technology seems to become no stranger to human life. That means due to the its inexorable advance , we can easily approach the availabilities of technology due to modernization and digitalization. For example, it is common to use online studying apps which have been preprogrammed with various kinds of lessons such as Duolingo - a linguistic virtual assistant. Second, technology provides more accessibility to academic pursuit in some remote areas. In particular, it is challenging to send teachers to those location which takes much time and effort.
However, I fear that this robotic application might bring more problems than it could address. First and foremost, I strongly believe that teachers are more adaptive to the need of learners which technology devices can hardly replace. That is because robots are taught to transfer all the data which they have already been preprogrammed so they cannot immediately give exact answer to the a side question from student. Moreover, if we completely replace teachers with technology, there will be influence on students’ mental behavior toward studying. To be more specific, teachers are known as the ones who not only transfer the knowledge but also inspire, encourage and excite their students . That means learners can easily lack their motivation if the teacher is now replaced with a robot with systematically speech, which may leads to a fall in productivity.
In conclusion, there is forming an idea of replacing teacher with digital technology in educational setting. Although it is justifiable to some extent, I strongly believe that we should still acquire a deeper appreciation for teachers' role in academic pursuits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, for example, in conclusion, in particular, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40978593272 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12322529956 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599388379205 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4336515531 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.5625 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239862297653 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721972181724 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03902873961 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1342074475 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353782213201 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.