The development of technology has been a key to many successful enterprise .but still it has some negative impact on the social relationship of the users
First the excessive use of phone has destroyed many homes, no one has time for the other, people now spend almost all the 24 hours of the day on social media such as; Instagram, Facebook, Twitter and so on. That family bond is been taking parents don't communicate as usual and children eschew from their parents because of no one to talk. Families can stay without visiting each other rather they communicate through email, normal call and even video callls.
On the other hand technology has been the life to many successful business and made life so easy the use of social media people can be able do their business online without searching for customers and the consumers can also buy online and delivered to them safely at the comfort of their home without going to the market.
Despite the the benefits of technology its negative effects on social relationship cannot be over emphasize students no longer read in groups and relate and help the average ones to learn more from since everything is on the internet no more visiting the library, the average student's suffer from that, and there is lack of communication among the students base on their views on what they are studying.
In conclusion technology has kept the world moving and has many positive effect . It's negative effects on the social relationship cannot be overlooked because it has mare many beautiful homes, and brought self centeredness among students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, still, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91417910448 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56019149793 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563432835821 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.55844087 49.4020404114 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.142857143 106.682146367 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.2857142857 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142879006475 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651522332404 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376702876866 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917159969253 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507334247952 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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