Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. To what extent would you say that television has positively or negatively affected the cultural development of your society?
Nowadays, cultural developments are affected by many factors and the most prominent one is the effect of TV. TV has successfully modified many aspects of traditional cultures. Some reckon it beneficial for the culture whilist for others it is hazardous. In my viewpoint, however, the impact of TV on my society is far beyond positivity as it has contributed to globalization of culture and decrease in number of followers of cultural events.
To begin with, TV has contributed a lot in prevalence of globalization of culture i...
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-06-17 | shreyk | 67 | view |
| 2021-01-28 | ARPANielts | 61 | view |
| 2020-09-03 | hoaithuongnguyen | 84 | view |
| 2014-06-16 | awais | 89 | view |
- Most schools offer some type of physical education program to their students.Why is physical education important?Should physical education classes be required or optional? 67
- RE-WRITE: The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons. 90
- In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.Discuss both these views and give your o 78
- The difference between the rich and the poor in the world today seems to be increasing What do you think are causes of this What if anything should be done to stop this from happening 74
- The charts below show how average middle income families spend their household budget in two different years Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 81
Comments
I think practice isnt much
I think practice isnt much beneficial in my case
Well, only practice can make
Well, only practice can make you perfect. But you need to be on the right track.
We have given you some suggestions, did you follow them?
as it has contributed to globalization of culture and decrease in number of followers of cultural events.
as it has contributed to the globalization of culture and the decrease in the number of followers of cultural events.
TV has contributed a lot in prevalence of globalization
TV has contributed a lot in the prevalence of globalization
countries like India have become greatly influenced by foreign fashion and styles
countries like India have been greatly influenced by foreign fashion and styles
Thus, globalization of clothing in my society is attributed
Thus, the globalization of clothing in my society is attributed
So, past activities of attending cultural events like dancing and exhibitions on regular basis is diminished
So, past activities ... are diminished
But the negative effects like prevalence of globalization of culture
But the negative effects like the prevalence of globalization on culture
Sentence: Thus, globalization of clothing in my society is attributed directly to TV which has made cultural dresses like embroided frocks, cloaks and so on almost extinct.
Error: embroided Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
Don't repeat words, phrases, and sentences, or as less as possible. like 'contributed to'
Be sensitive to put two 'of' together, like 'prevalence of globalization of culture '
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 338 350
No. of Characters: 1818 1500
No. of Different Words: 176 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.288 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.379 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.134 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 154 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 130 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 93 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 52 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.882 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.533 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.647 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.375 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.585 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.11 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5