In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way.
Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
These days, companies always emphasize their goods are news in some aspects. There are a lot of reasons behind this trend. From my viewpoint, I agree that this is a positive development that provides vast benefits.
On the one hand, the major reason for this is companies want to allure more customers to purchase their products, therefore, maximize their revenue. In other words, if they continue to produce products with the latest features and technology, more users are interested in their goods. Moreover, they also want to increase the circulation of their goods related to the brand. For example, in recent months, Apple has advertised its brand-new iPhone integrated with the latest innovation and features. After that, other products related to this phone are popular as the phone itself.
Furthermore, it is obvious that this kind of development makes our life much more comfortable. To illustrate, many companies have offered their products with a wide range of useful functions such as call features for the watch. In addition, it increases our quality of life. Besides, in this era, people can travel to every place without getting lost thanks to the map function of the new technology in the smartphone. On top of that, new innovations will always be updated. That is to say, since companies are competing with each other in the technology race to create new features for their goods, users will be benefits the most since there are plenty of technologies to choose from.
To conclude, maximizing the sales figures and convincing the customer to purchase the products related to the brand are the reasons for this trend, which offer huge benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, kind of, such as, in other words, on top of that, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08394160584 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62927013277 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57299270073 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5715220566 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237290650929 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767348421009 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038983275364 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143256635961 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586337454694 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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