There are many animal species close to endangered. Some say that only animals that are beneficial to people should be protected. Do you agree or disagree ?
Endangered species are now in distress condition suggested to be preserved. It is still being discussed and becomes controversial issue in considering only the positive impacts to the human lives. I extremely agree that the roles of unchecked biodiversities in ecosystem and economic should be seen as the reason to protect the wildlife.
A 2010 study concluded that unknown species loss would wipe exceeding a fifth off global economic output by 2050. The endemic species could be the assets of the origin countries in order to be tourism sites that could increase the foreign exchange. Several businesses are able to be held in providing virgin forests that contain endemic species in case to attract more visitors. For instance, economic growth of Flores native people in per capita income reached virtually 7% in 2015 as the breakdown of tourists increased dramatically up to 20% from the previous year.
The equilibrium of ecosystem will be severely affected if the elements disappear faster than it used to. The ecologists said that the extinction rate had increased a hundredfold over the last century. The recent researches propose that the ecosystems with a broader range of species are more stable and resilient because they possibly support the habitats where they live in. The tertiary consumers will be decreasing, and the primary consumers will be booming if the secondary consumers are disturbed. The earth will unexpectedly respond to the imbalance which can impact the human being.
Economic concerns indeed should be visible to gain the return of investment as high as possible in protecting the whole species becoming extinct. Considering all the domino effects are much more significant because could affects our life sustainability. It is believed that biodiversities have great correlation to the health of the living environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224358974359 0.247107183377 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.185897435897 0.155533422707 120% => OK
Adjectives: 0.11858974359 0.0946595960268 125% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0480769230769 0.0501214627716 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0224358974359 0.0437548338989 51% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11858974359 0.122226691241 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0576923076923 0.0403226058552 143% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90057816291 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0352564102564 0.0326793684256 108% => OK
Particles: 0.00320512820513 0.00163938923432 196% => OK
Determiners: 0.108974358974 0.0861772015684 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0352564102564 0.021408717616 165% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0128205128205 0.011925033212 108% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1865.0 1933.35771543 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 316.048096192 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.36518771331 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.430034129693 0.374742101984 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.344709897611 0.28420135186 121% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.242320819113 0.203846283523 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.170648464164 0.137316102897 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90057816291 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.037074148 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62457337884 0.56093040696 111% => OK
Word variations: 71.3498666703 60.7387585426 117% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.5333333333 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1150386942 49.517814964 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 127.492653851 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.814263465372 41% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.99599198397 200% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 54.0043230944 49.1944974215 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.5625 1.69124875643 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183229512384 0.332605444948 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0845746004929 0.102741220458 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0467673143998 0.0668466124924 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.575993353704 0.534860350844 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.112221871379 0.148594505496 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948303910901 0.134430193775 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583756205286 0.0742795772207 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.419684344819 0.324371583561 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.016275209034 0.0638462369009 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152771955871 0.228012699653 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043512237549 0.058150111329 75% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.