More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause and the possible solutions?
Car is tertiary sector in people’s lives. Yet, it will become the primary need of some people in developing countries. This phenomenon leads to the increasing of first car’s quantity that could bring various problems to the human survival.
In developing country, the purchasing of first car is incrementally rising. Initially, traffic density will be increasing unless the number of cars is corresponding to restructuring of road that can cause developing congestion. Hazardous exhaust fumes that are generated by motor vehicles could also bring detrimental effects to the environment such as depletion of ozone layer caused by interaction between exhaust gas and trioxygen and trapped gas that could trigger greenhouse effect. In any case, According to experts, transportation consumes 27% of energy uses in the world that the most common energy used is fossil fuel which means excessive consumption of energy.
That being said, the role of government is needed to tackle this issue. Firstly, tax of private car should be reviewed and heightened by the officials as high tax of private automobiles can lead to reduction of auto’s quantity. Eventually, Improvement in the quality and quantity of public transportation is required due to the fact that Affordability and availability of public transportation push back the number of people who commute using private vehicle. For instance, the commuter train should be cheap and comfortable instead of the number of train should be added.
To sum up, inhabitants buys the first automobile based on the needs or lifestyles in developing countries. Some actions could have been taken by the government in order to solve the problems that are generated by excessive car usage. Therefore, lofty tax of vehicle and significant improvement of public transportation’s quality and quantity could maintain or even diminish the first cars purchasing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rious problems to the human survival. In developing country, the purchasing of...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'for instance', 'such as', 'in any case', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.293768545994 0.247107183377 119% => OK
Verbs: 0.163204747774 0.155533422707 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0890207715134 0.0946595960268 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0296735905045 0.0501214627716 59% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00296735905045 0.0437548338989 7% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.121661721068 0.122226691241 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0712166172107 0.0403226058552 177% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.19284246928 2.80594681477 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0296735905045 0.0326793684256 91% => OK
Particles: 0.00296735905045 0.00163938923432 181% => OK
Determiners: 0.0741839762611 0.0861772015684 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0356083086053 0.021408717616 166% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0207715133531 0.011925033212 174% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1918.0 1933.35771543 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 316.048096192 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.50169491525 6.12580529183 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.406779661017 0.374742101984 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.322033898305 0.28420135186 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.247457627119 0.203846283523 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.189830508475 0.137316102897 138% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19284246928 2.80594681477 114% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.037074148 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566101694915 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 59.6396710336 60.7387585426 98% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0714285714 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6830061616 49.517814964 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 127.492653851 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.814263465372 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 53.2748184019 49.1944974215 108% => OK
Elegance: 2.48484848485 1.69124875643 147% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29338039537 0.332605444948 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0917159955689 0.102741220458 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0522293599771 0.0668466124924 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.568073422402 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.088084137211 0.148594505496 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139495601603 0.134430193775 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491321063918 0.0742795772207 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.402871041722 0.324371583561 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0325083041044 0.0638462369009 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226180884254 0.228012699653 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452867889948 0.058150111329 78% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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