There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
We could not imagine how this world becomes without music. Nowadays, a ton of music is played and heard accross the countries. Commonly, music is needed to express human feeling. When we get a bunch of happiness, we sing with happy lyrics. But, when we are hurt, a tender song that flow out from our lips.
Some people believe that a traditional music is more important to another music genre. On the other hand, international music is trusted to become the most essential music. In this essay, I will explain if this two music types have an essential impact.
The traditional music usually is sang by local people. This kind of music et least has two reasons why it is important to human life. Firstly, the traditional music also have a role as a culture within society and it have positive impact for them. In example, Javanese children have a habit singing together to stronger their friendship. Secondly, it’s full with lesson learn from the era which the music was born. For instance, many Melayu’s music share a story about environment condition when it was created. From the lyrics, we can compare it to nowadays environment.
Beside traditional music, there is an international music that also essential to our communities. It’s because two reasons. First, from the international music we know about the world music trend. When BTS song entered this country, for instance, we know that one of the world trend is Korean song. Secondly, we can improve our english or another foreign language. When we sing it, it’s like funny practice a foreign language.
For the conclusion, the traditional and international music have a different style, but both of them are crucial for our communities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: is usually
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97909407666 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66890311993 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564459930314 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.7839293805 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.9545454545 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0454545455 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22727272727 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.492558559472 0.244688304435 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157445636594 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118149248161 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294745334177 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700709269795 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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