There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do
we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important
than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Kinds of music people listen nowadays act of different tastes and types. For illustrative modern international pop music as well as the traditional songs. All people feel and listen the great of music with there excited. The importance of music can not be denied because of its positive effect on people who listen to music.
Music is like the wind, always by my side. How the music is impressive depends on the age, favourite, mood, time and situation. Firstly, the feeling of love of people is different from another, only did be listened to the music which appears, would have been able to live a normal life that to 18 music feeling situation. Secondly, music let us know the position of a nation against war and music as a message to our world. It refreshes us to love, refreshes ourselves and inspires us to do good things. With the recent modern communications, channels and internet, classical music is little by little unpopular for the teenagers. They are substantially affected by the western music and they do not like the traditional and country music. It is extremely simple that they follow there own trends and hobbies. In my opinion, this type of music describes the old history, has to know and learn about their folk. In conclusion, I hope the young generations around the world have some opportunities to know and learn about their historical music.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84255319149 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69107809489 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578723404255 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.527008984 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2857142857 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439032859516 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164675825847 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851408886398 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.35830462834 0.151304729494 237% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152118243539 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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