There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Nowadays, there are variable music types can be found around the world. They have a great influence on human's daily life for many reasons, and I think traditional music is much more important than the ones that are played globally.
Music is not only an entertaining tool but also an answer to many difficulties people usually meet in their life. Music helps us concentrate on our tasks easier. When you listen to relaxing music, you will forget the outside world and pay the full focus on the job and the background rhythm. An Youtube list of light symphony music maybe the only thing you need in order to have an efficient working day. Furthermore, many people can find their motivators thanks to the music. Some specific kinds of music have unique rhythms which can enhance your brain and generate more energy to your whole body. Therefore, you can feel stronger, fresher and more determined to do things you usually cannot. For instance, epic music can optimize muscles and help you run twice your normal distance without exhausting.
Music recently is commercialized and globalized. People tend to listen to songs which have meaningless lyrics and weird rhythm. Nevertheless, national traditional music, in my opinion, still have a strong position in the musical world. They are an undetachable part of a country's history. Each nation has its own unique traditional songs and they reflect its history as well as characteristics. For example, Cai Luong is Vietnamese folk music which is played since the wartime. However, those music are listened by much fewer people and, therefore, need to be reserved and developed by authorities and every citizen.
In conclusion, music plays a role of a good companion who helps make our life balance and more colorful. Additionally, national traditional music is more important than ones we can hear every day even in this busy and fast-paced era.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'A' instead of 'An' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: A
...s on the job and the background rhythm. An Youtube list of light symphony music ma...
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Line 5, column 488, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this music' or 'those musics'?
Suggestion: this music; those musics
...h is played since the wartime. However, those music are listened by much fewer people and, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05095541401 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70052427358 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601910828025 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6168349396 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4736842105 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5263157895 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42105263158 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414534799334 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137205858143 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770039032039 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274551178112 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239547973817 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.