In the current era, music has become very vast. Wide verity in the music has been introduced. Music has come from ages. This is because of its pleasantness after hearing it. Music helps in various aspects while working in day to day activities. For instance, when you feel drowsy or weary you can hear silent music which will assist you to get a ride from it. You will feel relax and calm after hearing the music. Meditation can also be done with the help of music. These are some importance of music.
Having said that, we usually prefer to hear traditional or classical music. As we can understand the lyrics of the same. Music is not only sound but also included with feelings. This feeling might be of relaxation or enthusiastic or even exciting. The people who loves international music are those who know their culture very well. For example, in Germany, if you want to take a feel of Music you must first have to learn German language.
In the recent days, it has been observed that, the exchange of international music has widely spread. This is because of beauty of Music which leads to expand it everywhere around the globe. Having said that one who is familiar with this county only those will enjoy the most of their music and it not possible for all. So, it is essential to give importance to Traditional music rather than International music.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66390041494 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43644442334 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55601659751 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9097278487 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.1578947368 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6842105263 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389096020282 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143482412289 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881635413773 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292598894024 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367032077072 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.86 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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