There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Across the centuries music has been a vital part of human expression. By different forms and origins, music is part of our life. Many reasons make listen to music a good habit such as the support to relax, increase your motivation, and help to understand our regional or international reality by an emotional and artistic perspective. This essay will describe shortly why music is relevant for us and will explain a view that defends why traditional music should have more media space and relevance nowadays.
Music is one of the most rustic human expression. The music is used to share all kinds of humans feelings by different forms across history, creating good sensations, bring back memories, giving comfort and, helping to celebrate something. For instance, after a hard day or when you are tired, is common to listen to your favorite playlist to relax and cool down.
On the other hand, is vital to consider music like a cultural history record of a nation and how important is to protect it avoid international influence. Actions to preserve national music and traditions are essential to keep safe our culture and historic legacy. In some cases, countries are developing programs to finance and promote the next generation of musicians to learn about your national music to spread and preserve this cultural patrimony.
To conclude, music is more than just organized sounds and play it, music is it about creates a soundtrack for all moments that we live, and share or experiences, opinions, and felling with others. But, is critical to observe how the international influences and media trend are impacting in the traditional music and culture. Music is the cultural wealth and expression of people and needs to be preserved and cared for like it.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'centuries'' or 'century's'?
Suggestion: centuries'; century's
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Message: Did you mean 'avoids'?
Suggestion: avoids
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to be preserved and cared for like it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for instance, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02389078498 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72328430711 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587030716724 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3832034148 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.230769231 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421356452626 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152981660141 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590818031393 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246858568764 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807450873929 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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