There are many extinct animals species in the world Some people think we should protect animals from dying out while others believe we should spend more time on problems of human beings Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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...arm even humans if no measures are taken .Animals are mandatory to maintain balanc...
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...faces famine and diseases therefore they should allow solving these difficulties...
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...ce as much they give protecting animals.In this essay the protection of dying out ...
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... animals and solving human kind problems will be discussed. Protecting dying ou...
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...moned to fund animal protecting programs .Extincting animal species are very impo...
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...d animal protecting programs .Extincting animal species are very important to pre...
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...mportant to preserve balanced ecosystems ,they are in the middle of the food chain...
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...cies of bees are disappearing every year ,as known to every one bees are the only...
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...y one bees are the only source of honey .In addition,tens of fish kinds no longer...
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...herefore maritime life is desequilibred.Consequently by preserving animals humans preserve t...
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...herefore maritime life is desequilibred.Consequently by preserving animals humans preserve t...
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...g animals humans preserve their own kind . However,managing extinct animals issu...
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...mans preserve their own kind . However,managing extinct animals issue shouldn't ke...
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...ties of handling their own kind problems .Diseases, famine, earthquakes, hurricane...
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...countries because of famine and diseases .Therefore great efforts are needed that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, so, therefore, third, thus, for instance, in addition, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75444839858 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5089175455 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.131821099 49.4020404114 280% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 323.4 106.682146367 303% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.2 20.7667163134 271% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.4 7.06120827912 261% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242888521786 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147295244349 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596254077516 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157435523663 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371015751131 0.056905535591 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.8 13.0946893788 258% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.28 50.2224549098 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.96 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.85 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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