There is certainly a difference in thoughts, ideas, and actions between children, their parents, and grandparents. Why do these differences exist? Does it cause problems in your community, in your opinion?
In a rapidly developing world, the differences in opinion, attitude, and lifestyle of children from those of parents and grandparents are obvious. This can be due to several reasons ranging from the emergence of new technologies to the influence of western cultures. This leads to various problems such as a lack of inter-generation communication.
Emerging technologies such as smartphones, mobile applications, laptops, and video games create a cultural gap between two generations. While the parents prefer personal one-on-one interaction, children use Facebook and Twitter to communicate with friends. The gap is further increased by the spread of western ideas in developing countries. This is evident in the food habits of children, who prefer burgers and junk food, and parents who prefer homemade traditional food. For instance, recent research in India claimed that western cultural influence spread through international brands such as Levis, McDonald's, KFC, and Facebook has decreased the time children spend with parents in 2017 by at least 35 percent as compared to 1990. This has tremendously increased the differences in thoughts, ideas, and actions between the two generations.
These cultural differences result in a lack of communication between two generations which leads to improper guidance for youth on one hand and loss of cultural identity on the other. Social scientists have proved that if children and parents do not spend sufficient time eating food and discussing ideas, events, history, and culture, a community will forget its culture within five generations.
In conclusion, the differences in ideas and attitudes of children and parents are natural. However, these may seriously hamper the development of a society and lead to a loss of identity. The differences should be bridged by encouraging the parents and children to spend more time with each other.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33484162896 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88483452277 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656108597285 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4875507989 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.181818182 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195594262866 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099003590554 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175668893643 0.0667982634062 263% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195594262866 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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