In this global era, everyone wants to put the feet on the race of development, However, nobody watching their bad footprints on the environment. There are plenty of human activities that are impacting global warming. In my opinion, human beings are a major contributor to global warming and in this essay, I will explain the reason why the people are the main source of that and solution for the problems.
certainly, there is so much evidence are found that the fossil fuel which is used to generate electricity is the main source of emitting carbon dioxide into the environment and the co2 is the main factor for global warming, the co2 and another pollutant in the atmosphere hinder the solar radiations even though they trap them and because of that there is a rise in the temperature level on the surface and it leads to the melting of glaciers. The solution for this is that the most of Nation's thinking is to curb the use of fossil fuels and encourage people to use clean energy.
Secondly, the reason for increasing temperature is the high use of vehicle and air conditioners, however, they are a necessity for this fastest era, but they are a big cause of air pollution and increase the global temperature, though I think this can be solved by human beings easily firstly, by sharing cars when they going office or uses of public transport and secondly to minimizing the use of air conditioner, this two solution deter the air pollution and slow down the global warming.
Incapsulation, global warming having huge tremendous side effects on the earth and this is because of man-made activities so, we can minimize this by using clean energy and curb the use of vehicles and other pollution-causing materials.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'watches'.
Suggestion: watches
...he race of development, However, nobody watching their bad footprints on the environment...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Certainly
... that and solution for the problems. certainly, there is so much evidence are found th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, i think, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84121621622 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73517444355 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.102074336 49.4020404114 302% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 204.714285714 106.682146367 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.2857142857 20.7667163134 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185190548191 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850697876186 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515322500944 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117922650566 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474725422533 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 13.0946893788 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.68 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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