There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher.
It is true that there is an increasing number of man-made activities which affect worldwide temperature . As far as I am concerned, this phenomenon can result in serious problems, which can be tackled using approriate meassures
It is possibly said that this issue may be caused by some main factors. One of the prominent reasons concerning this problem is people’s awarness. This is because countless people have the propensity for being lazy to do something that is not convenient for them. Moreover, a selected few people keep in mind that the garbage can is quite far away and do not want to dump the trash so they decide to littering, which is led to enviromental pollution. Henceforth, consciousness of people is considered as the chief culprift behind global warming. Another factor leading to this situation is building. This means office building or houses are one of the causes of pollution. Due to demand of man, innumerable carpenter cut down the tree for the neccessity of building facilities. Deforestation exerts such detrimental impacts upon environment and provide oxygen, resulting in earth has high temperature. For instance, because lack of money, a handful of people cut down the tree which is endangered in order to sell for others in such a high price.
In truth, some imperative measures ought to be taken to resolve these propesctive issues. Raising awarness of everybody is highly recommended, which prevent world from being polluted by man. The government should propagate and also add some channel about protecting enviroment. It was human’s responsibility to keep the environment clean. Therefore, the earth will no more be polluted, temperature will decreased. In addition, everyone should be encouraged to turn to cleaning the place where they live as the alternative to reduce trash in residental area.
In conclusion, there are indeed various repercussions regarding global warming, yet, they can be solved one acording measures are enlisted imperatively
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29022082019 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01691662566 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624605678233 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2697225749 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.083339975872 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283370783282 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593697022126 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621049060858 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464990723559 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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