There shall be benefits for society if all advertisement forms are completely banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The total prohibition of whole advertising is will be advantageous for community. It seems to me that advertisement ban is not in fact the most benefits if applying to all forms that I will explain why below.
First and Foremost, It might be said that advertisement's prohibition would decline a market share's campaign. The reason often given for this is that many enterprises cannot use advertisement to promote and publish their products, hence it would decline their sale of goods. A further possible negative factor is related to lack of employment opportunity. If all forms of advertisement were lost, It would be reduce the productivity in manufactures and thus the enterprises would no need many employees to work on their companies. Furthermore, it appears a possibility that advertising would be of crucial importance for society as a consumer. The reason is provided by the fact that determining the quality of product could be revealed in broad comparison with others product. If the company did not advertise the items produced, there would be less probability for consumer to recognize a wide range of product.
It is true that there are some negatives to allow advertisement, most notably advertisement try to influence our emotions by making us buy things we do not need or want. However, in my perspective, it would be unwise to ban all forms of advertisement merely due to this disadvantage. There would be the effective way to minimize the negative impact, in which people in society have to be more realized about many things that they need and want to buy. Example can be seen in making a list of things that needed.
Overall, It seems advisable to conclude that advertising in all forms not be totally prohibited. This is because not only would advertisement ban decline a market share, but would decrease employment opportunity and reduce consciousness of new products as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'advertisements'' or 'advertisement's'?
Suggestion: advertisements'; advertisement's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...advertisements prohibition would decline a market shares campaign. The reason oft...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is provided by the fact that determining the quality of product could be revealed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, in fact, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09525274722 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539682539683 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6349391593 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244000007498 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096545694238 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575977298975 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164318829887 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290227544002 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.