In the modern era, everyone wants to lead a superior life. For leading a good life many people go to abroad for work and leave their country and sattle down in abroad with family. There is both merits and demerits of this statement. I will illustrate both the sides of the coin in the following passages.
To begin with, I want to indicate that mostly people leave their houses because in their country they do not earn enough money. Abroad offer high-payment job for their residence and offer more facilities than other countries. People take their family with them because in the foreign countries future is safe. Moreover, education system is better. By living in abroad people are able to know different culture and communication is possible with other people. In abroad, older citizens get penssins from government and other citizen get other facilites at cheaper rate.
On the other hand, this create a cultural shock in young ones. Young ones are not emotionally attached with their country and their culture. Families face a lot of problem in abroad like some time colour difference, religion difference and so on. Abroad people do not adopt foreign people easily and that people found difficulties in finding houses, jobs and school in abroad.
To sum up, many people settle in abroad with families. In my perspective, there is both advantages and disadvantages also. If government provide good jobs and good facilities in their own countries, definately people never leave their country. No doubt, disadvantages are more but for solve this problem, goverment improve their countries and give more chance to earn money
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'There are both merits'?
Suggestion: There are both merits
... and sattle down in abroad with family. There is both merits and demerits of this statement. I will ...
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Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
...ountry and their culture. Families face a lot of problem in abroad like some time colour differe...
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Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are both advantages'?
Suggestion: there are both advantages
...broad with families. In my perspective, there is both advantages and disadvantages also. If government p...
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Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...re is both advantages and disadvantages also. If government provide good jobs and go...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, no doubt, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08550185874 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55100401976 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587360594796 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5349238766 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.0 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9444444444 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395379698097 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114345545656 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999611950248 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242051746968 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357168076537 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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