These days, many people like to watch live performances (such as shows or concerts) at home, either on TV or on a computer, instead of attending in person. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?
It is argued by many people that to get the best out of an event such as a play, show, or sporting event, one must attend it in person rather than simply watching it on TV. In my opinion, while there are some compelling reasons to do so, the consequences far outweigh the benefits.
On the one hand, watching a live broadcast of a performance on TV is a convenient and economical choice. Firstly, people don't have to book tickets and travel long distances to see live performances. When people go to crowded places, they face the risk of accidents such as injuries, and pushing, as well as criminal activities such as theft or pickpocketing. Secondly, although tickets to live performances are very expensive, watching live concerts at home is more affordable and even free for viewers. This helps many people with limited financial means have access to such exciting entertainment. As a result, television performance has many advantages for becoming popular.
On the other hand, being part of a live concert is extremely exciting in many ways. Live performances and their atmosphere with thousands of people and high-quality sound always evoke deep emotions among participants. Being part of an enthusiastic crowd allows people to fully experience the passion that they cannot find in recorded performances. Live concerts are also a good choice for finding friends who share the same interests. Moreover, visitors will be able to get closer to their idols, communicate and express their admiration. For example, when Arijit Singh was scheduled to hold a concert in Delhi in July, the concert was completely sold out. This shows the fans' love for their group.
In conclusion, I believe that despite the benefits of a telecast, attending a concert in person provides a more engaging experience. This is because the electrifying environment of a live event cannot be replicated in a living room. Additionally, special events and performances that are available live enhance the overall experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13455657492 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98050162103 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590214067278 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.535144698 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2777777778 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321886365113 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903937009527 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487311719815 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184533182062 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575356682966 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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