These days, many people like to watch live performances (such as shows or concerts) at home, either on TV or on a computer, instead of attending in person. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?
There is no doubt that technology has a significant bearing on all aspects of everyone life, including work, education, communication and entertainment. In this regard, some individuals prefer to get entertained with the help of TV, computer, social media platforms rather than attending them physically. This essay will discuss both pros and corns and explain why disadvantages out advantages.
To begin with, watching a live concert on tv is not only convenient but also cost effective. In other words, people do not have to buy tickets and travel long distance in order to attend concert. For instance, majority of citizens watch live cricket match on television instead of stadium because they do not want to purchase expensive tickets. This helps many people, with limited financial means, to have access of live sport.
On the other hand, witnessing a live concert is more exciting in many ways, visitors will be able to get closer to their idols and will have chance to communicate with them. Apart from this, being a part of live concert , they also get great opportunity to meet new friends ,who share the same interest.
In conclusion, I believe that despite of having many benefits of broadcast , attending a concert in person provide engaging experience. This is because the environment of concert can not be simulated in a room.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...s watch live cricket match on television instead of stadium because they do not w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ve tickets. This helps many people, with limited financial means, to have access ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ite of having many benefits of broadcast , attending a concert in person provide e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10407239819 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80693848487 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674208144796 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2108241137 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.545454545 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230173278389 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084672297729 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368167867515 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132963507321 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558136025425 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s watch live cricket match on television instead of stadium because they do not w...
^^
Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve tickets. This helps many people, with limited financial means, to have access ...
^^
Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... from this, being a part of live concert , they also get great opportunity to meet...
^^
Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...et great opportunity to meet new friends ,who share the same interest. In concl...
^^
Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ite of having many benefits of broadcast , attending a concert in person provide e...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10407239819 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80693848487 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674208144796 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2108241137 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.545454545 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230173278389 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084672297729 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368167867515 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132963507321 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558136025425 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.