These days most of the students oppose discipline as something something super imposed on them. Do you support or oppose this idea ?
As fully regulated life style of the students may make them feel restricted in many activities for their likings or interest so, most of the students sometimes take it as over restriction on them. Whether discipline is beneficial or not for students is a matter of discussion in the society. However, I believe that for shaping up the overall character of the person, discipline must be inculcated in the life by students.
The first and foremost reason to oppose this statement is that proper rules and regulations in the life of pupils provide efficient and respectable life in the society. When a student is under regulated environment, he learns multiple skills as punctuality, determination and so on. Resultantly, these skills lead him to provide order and direction in his life to be successful without being overstressed because his all the actions occur in limitation and with efficiency. So, when hard work discipline pays off to students, it tends them to become productive members of the society in the form of good leaders, teachers and so on.
What is more, either the student is at educational place or at home, disciplined life style work as a ladder to success. Though there are some misconceptions in some students that discipline becomes an obstacles on the way of their freedom, yet , discipline is the only mean to enhance and secure the freedom by setting and fulfilling the small or big goals in front of them.
There can be no exaggeration in saying that life of the students without discipline is beyond imagination because not only human beings even the natural forces live in strict discipline so discipline leads students to become fully-civilized personality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06785714286 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99108997141 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.2293152314 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.9 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167045857214 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658201813903 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303918516315 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102618206322 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123542795016 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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