These days’ people like to invite lots of friends on celebrations such as marriage and birthday parties and spend huge money on such functions. What is the reason behind this trend? What effect can it have on people’s life?
It is known that people prefer to need many guests on commemoration and release lots of finances. In this essay I would like to examine the motive why this activity is familiar and what the influence to becoming it before having a reasonable conclusion.
In the one hand, bit more people invite lots of friends on several parties and they issue much money caused by some reasons. Firstly, some people could show their establishment and fruitfulness. It is because many people believe with what do they see is a fact and they require a confession to fulfill their inner satisfaction. Therefore, lots of people are willing to prove themselves through this way. For example, people who lives in an environment that likes to correct other people’s live tend to visible perfect constantly. They would hold a grand party to receive acknowledgment from their circle. In short, recognition becomes a great deal for some people to be accepted in their environment. Secondly, many people desire to expand their connection in several of their businesses. It is due to a lots of business need some of the necessery relation to maintain it. For instance, the big companies such as indofood requires another enterprise to provide the raw materials for maintains the production. At that point, few people creat several commemorations for preserve their business cooperation thus they pull out more funds to satisfy their business partners.
Undeniably, there are some negative influences following this case. First of all, this would be a waste for bit more people who have ordinary financial ability. For model, people who have a mediocre salary would hold a magnificent wedding party consequently they have to take on a loan. This activity would lead any harm for the maker. In addition, the more people spend their money, they would be easily disappointed if the result is unappropriate with their expectation. For the sample, people choose the expensive wedding decoration thus in the wedding day, the decoration is nasty then their desire afterward they would be seen frustrated.
On the whole, asking lots of people to come in the celebration and release much fund could be appropriate in suitable conditions and reasones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 802, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...veral of their businesses. It is due to a lots of business need some of the necessery ...
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Line 2, column 826, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...s. It is due to a lots of business need some of the necessery relation to maintain it. For ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in short, such as, first of all, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1129476584 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84281770764 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2874248085 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.15 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244919978902 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794285270096 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430665737907 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15493135511 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393745807603 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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