Nowadays, it is quite popular to change a career path more than 2 times for people working in different spheres. In this essay, some benefits of varying the job places and also some drawbacks which people should be ready to face will be discussed.
Regarding the advantages, firstly it is worth to mention that most people have to make a decision about the career of their whole life at the age of 17, after finishing the school. And the fact that such choices can be made by a mistake is hard to deny. In this case, changing a profession is much better than suffering for the whole life doing unpleasant activity. As an example can be used a situation of my close friend, who had finished a bachelor degree on chemistry, but after a year of working in a factory understood that the she wants to do something connected with media. Now she is a journalist and fully satisfied with her work place. Secondly, a frequent change of career during the lifetime helps people broaden their horizons by doing different kind of work and keeping in touch with lots of colleagues from different spheres.
However, disadvantages are also quite numerous. The major problem with people who often change their jobs, is that it is hard to become a professional in any sphere without a relevant experience. So, for a beginner this drawback leads to the consequence of being not paid enough until gaining a relevant work experience. Another issue is that changing a career is always stressful, and such frequent changes of working places can harm the people’s health and cause lots of diseases.
All things considered, changing a career is never easy. It is necessary to weigh up the pros of doing adorable activity as well as an opportunity to gain a new life experience and cons of not being well-paid at first and a high level of stress. Personally I believe that benefits in terms of personal growth eventually outweigh any negatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80538922156 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68973111065 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568862275449 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0902635389 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255907523782 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812307388426 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697047851432 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152558910807 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719505978778 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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