Think of an environmental problem facing your country. What are the reasons for this problem? What will the consequences be if no solution is found?
One of the most serious problems making many governments in the world worried is the environmental issue, especially air pollution. It is an ongoing discussion everyday and has become a hot topic. Moreover, Vietnam is one of countries, where has to endure the most serious effects as a result of the contamination of air.
Air pollution can result from both human and natural actions. However, human activity is causing the environment to pollute in a number of ways. Industrial activity results in air pollution. Specifically, in the modern life, the businesses, factories and industrial areas are being created, and the their activities contribute to significant pollution of air. In addition, the air pollution is due to traffic activity. Almost Vietnamese are likely to use private vehicles rather than public transport because they are more convenient and comfortable. Hence, it has other issues. For example, Road system in Ho Chi Minh city consists of 1,000 roads with 1,700 km length. In 2015, this city has for 6,500,000 motorbikes, 600,000 cars and a few of them from 1990s. Traffic density at main crossroads are very high and the traffic jams always happen at rush hours. They increase air pollution there.
From those causes above, the consequences are unavoidable that affect people's health and the society in Vietnam. Nowadays, a great number of people die because of asthma and breathing problems in Vietnam. On the contrary, air pollution is main reason about more and more warming of the world. Temperature increase very dangerous which make to melt of ice from colder regions, forest will burn and animals will die. If we don't protect environment, level of sea will increase we don't have enough land to live.
In conclusion, air pollution is influencing to our environment and imperiled human lives. Hence, we have many ways to prevent them and protect our life. We should stop our actions and think about environment in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... pollution. It is an ongoing discussion everyday and has become a hot topic. Moreover, V...
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Line 2, column 295, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...industrial areas are being created, and the their activities contribute to significant po...
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Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t will burn and animals will die. If we dont protect environment, level of sea will ...
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Line 3, column 477, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ironment, level of sea will increase we dont have enough land to live. In conclusio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, as for, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.109375 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77847298158 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6825542798 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3181818182 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.59090909091 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0964002826257 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0236982895775 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274353234771 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0567717930678 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344047989457 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.