Thousands of people migrates to countries because they don't feel safe due to violence and crime in their country. Some people argue against giving them permanent stay in their country. What are your views.
Crime and violence is becoming a part of some overcrowded countries. In such countries some people think that their life is in risk because of some social violence and crimes. So they move to other countries for their internal satisfection and safe life.
Crime and violence disturbes human life in many ways. A normal person feels uncomfortable to go anywhere or to do job anywhere. In other words some people can't live their life in peace and enjoy in such society where crime ratio is much more high then normal. The children's life is also very hard there where murders, looting, and violence is very common. Such conditions push people to go abroad for a good future.
However people who go to other countries face many problems. Nowadays, it is becoming a big issue for people who go there that regional people doesn't like that government should allow them for permanent stay. According to my point of view temporary stay is better than permanent. If government give permanent stay to all people, one day definitely that country will be over crowded. What I believe is that people should be allowed for temporary work permits or for study purposes. By this they can learn from that country and know about the rules and regulations for controlling crime in their own conutry.
At the end I want to say that everybody have a right to live safe and risk free life. So if people migrates it is good but permanent stay is not a solution for decreasing the crime ratio in their own country.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2017-08-10 | Amandeep Singh | 56 | view |
- In Some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What are the causes and solutions ? 72
- The three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1987,1991,and 2001. 64
- Thousands of people migrates to countries because they don't feel safe due to violence and crime in their country. Some people argue against giving them permanent stay in their country. What are your views. 56
- The graph below shows the demands for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer.The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home. 80
- People are now more aware of their personal needs like personal care in the matter of beauty and health. Beauty is given much more importance then health and so health matters are getting marginalized. 63
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ob anywhere. In other words some people cant live their life in peace and enjoy in s...
^^^^
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...ety where crime ratio is much more high then normal. The childrens life is also very...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ple to go abroad for a good future. However people who go to other countries face m...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...eople who go there that regional people doesnt like that government should allow them ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t people should be allowed for temporary work permits or for study purposes. By t...
^^
Line 5, column 580, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he rules and regulations for controlling crime in their own conutry. At the e...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7213740458 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46921786928 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557251908397 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6619520958 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.3125 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348915571008 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109399772146 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784156333907 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218662722599 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565753827386 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.