Thesedays, most of the people want to live in perfect society but they hold different views about good society that how it can be an ideal society.According to me, many factors such as education and health of residents are necessary for making an ideal community and this work should be done by both government and individuals.
To begin with, a perfect society requires some elements and one of them is education.As, everyone wants to get good job for catering his or her needs and education plays a vital role for getting jobs because it provides knowledge and skills. Those , who have good qualification , are likely to get well-paid jobs easily. Resultantly, the rate of joblessness decreases and people become wealthier. Secondly, healthh is considered as most important for enjoying life and it should be top priority of government. Since science and technology are well developed, people can get rid from uncured diseases likewise cancer , tuberculosis and asthma as compared to past.
On the other hand, some measures should be taken by bureaucracy and folks to make perfect society. First of all, campaigns must be organised by authorities for making people aware about the health.Nowadays, many health ailments are being faced by masses and it is believed that prevention is better than cure.Moreover, paying taxes to government is highly imperative because it lets to officials to spend money on improving mandatory sectors like as, education, medical and infrastructure that these help to make an ideal society.
To sum up, although government is responsible for making a perfect community, without taking help of public, it cannot be done.
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- In many countries more and more young people are becoming jobless What problems do you think unemployment will cause to individuals and the society What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters 89
- The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000 Summarise the information by choosing and reporting the key features and make any relevant comparisons 100
- In many countries more and more young people are becoming jobless. What problems do you think unemployment will cause to individuals and the society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters. 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, such as, first of all, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23684210526 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01987355168 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.686967087 49.4020404114 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.777777778 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5555555556 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4444444444 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231940777169 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08332894553 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767388430623 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136673366303 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977441538828 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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