Throughout history, people have dreamt to live in a perfect society, but they haven't yet agreed on what a perfect society should be like. What do you think is the most important element of an ideal society? What can people do to build a perfect society?
Over hundreds of years people have been puzzled with idea of building perfect society. Decades have past, but thus task have not been achieved yet. Among all the endeavours that have been taken to create such society, the most important ones seem to be stable law and governmental systems. To attain this goal people must agree on following domestic laws and, what is more, international treaties, as well as to chase ideal principles of democracy and equality.
To begin with, it must not be neglected that law is initial regulator of people’s behavior. If there had not been law, people would have not survived in society. Law has a power to restrict the way governments act in international relations. For example, the basic rule in international law, which no government has a right to violate is prohibition of aggression towards other countries. If no society commits attacks on another, it will be one step to the ideal people’s co-existence.
Furthermore, the way society is organized form the second essential feature of the perfect society. It is obvious, that people have not came up with a better idea of organization than a state so far. A state can not exist without government, and nowadays in is of utmost importance to build this system on a basis of democracy. Human kind history have already proven, that absolutism is doomed to collapse. Take for instance Russia, where people had been suffering for decades until their voice was not heard. It is still relevant to recall Plato’s undoubhtedly perfect society depicted in Republic according to the principles of democracy, equality and justice.
To conclude, it must be pointed out, that people have to ensure that no one violates law, which must be fair and equally applied to everyone. As well as, they must be oriented on building transparent governmental system, where everyone has a right to be elected to lead his society to a better life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, so, still, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02173913043 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86709884329 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3115730588 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1176470588 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262855291148 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816138007027 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500200870347 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156337936037 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481912263843 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.