In these days, children are losing their focus and pay very less heed towards their studies. There are several reasons behind this issue. These induces will be discussed in following paragraphs and the solvents as well.
To begin with, schools are the foundation for every child. So, this is the biggest disease that will not let the country to be prosperous. First cause of this problem is, teaching system. Student are taught by using traditional methods that are no longer working. For instance, teacher prefer to teach using blackboard which seems boring to children. As a result, they try to escape from education. Apart from this, trainer behavior is the another induce of this dilemma. Trainers apply harsh methods to rectify the mistake. For example, masters physically punish their pupils for their mistake. Students afraid to go school.
If there is lock, there must be key. Therefore, some solution can be followed to tackle this issue. Initially, teachers should teach the students in playful way, definitely infants will prefer to concentrate at school. For example, trainer should use the toys to teach the counting and alphabets instead of boring blackboard. In addition to it, schools should provide training how to deal with our nation builder. Keeping the corporate punishment aside, they should educate them with love and affection.
To recapitulate, it can be said that,this terrific problem should be taken seriously and provide effective measures. So that, children can gain there interest at school and can learn properly.
- Schools are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history Some people think they should rather spend more time in teching skills that can help students find a job To what extend do you agree or disagree 75
- Advertisements of toys and fast foods are obstackles to the children s physical and mental development and at the same time cost loss of time and money of parents 71
- Nowadays air travel is cheaper than in the past Is this a positive or a negative development Discuss and give your own opinion 58
- Today, children find it difficult to concentrate and pay attention at school. What are the causes and what are the solutions? 56
- In many countries eighteen is considered the right age to start driving a car However some people say that the legal driving age should be twenty five Discuss both views and give your own opinion 79
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27016129032 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49418874534 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1929132631 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.2380952381 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8095238095 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.2380952381 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104136046638 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291273261787 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387970148773 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624855958666 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126434198302 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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