Today, crime rates among world are increasing day by day? What are the reasons behind this? How can be solve this?
Due to drastic rise in criminal activities which lead to lots of complications who are perilous for the whole world. However, there are uncountable obstacles such as poverty, unemployment and uneducated population along with solutions like fix hard punishment, creating more job opportunities, providing free education as well to tackle these hurdles.
The main factor that is why an amount of crime incline dramatically in the globe is that vast majority of humans are enduring form poorness. In addition to this, they are not eligible to purchase meals of three times for their families. Moving further, that is the reason they are involving to perform so many criminal activities like stealing of money and jewellery, robbery in banks, kidnapping and etcetera. The another major concerning area about this perception is that nowadays a huge number of young people are jobless so they have not enough wealth to spend their lives comfortably. Furthermore, they have great desire to live in high standards as compared with their peers so that is why they enter in crime rates to earn lots of money easily which spoil their life. For example, in Punjab, a higher percentage of young adults are vastly doing stealing of vehicles and kidnapping to earn their bread and butter because they have not any jobs as well as never income.
There are multifarious measures to solve this prospective and an initial is that it is mandatory for regimes that they should fix hard penalties for every kinds of crime. Adding to this, so that is why humans feel afraid to do that types of crimes when they think about these punishments. On the other hand, authorities make it crucial that they take various steps to reduce the proportion of unemployment at peak level. Apart from that, this is the reason to decline gradually rates of crime in the worldwide. For instance, in USA, Canada and other regions provide part-time jobs of data entry in which person can stay at home and start working online, earn income as well. Beside that, companies who are giving that types of work to adults are assisting government to decrease the percentage of jobless youngsters in nations.
In conclusion, although, masses who are not highly educated have not very good knowledge about crime world. Due to lack of knowledge, they enter in this world which create lots of problems for countries and their natives. In other words, if governments offer free education to humans than they not only for gaining knowledge about crime rates but also become a good citizens who pay their encourage in the world’s economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...Moving further, that is the reason they are involving to perform so many criminal activities ...
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Line 13, column 367, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'citizen'?
Suggestion: citizen
...bout crime rates but also become a good citizens who pay their encourage in the world&ap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 7.30460921844 301% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2169.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 433.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00923787529 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61349639015 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547344110855 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.753202689 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.588235294 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4705882353 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4117647059 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140376282433 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537141213087 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523607912541 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868231161169 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484390953614 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.