Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that in our society, the sales of products are attributed to advertisements rather than to the demand from consumers. In my opinion, the total goods consumption can be viewed as the reflection of powerful advertising.
Firstly, every company needs a method with which they can promote their products, which in most cases, that method is advertising. Advertisements help to bridge the gap between producers and consumers. They simply inform buyers and potential buyers about the product and its outstanding features, thus increase the sales of said product. Secondly, not only can advertising give people more choice, it also helps them to make insightful comparisons of products. Thirdly, as advertising is a creative and developing industry, it creates many well-paid jobs. Without advertising, a lot of people would be unemployed, thus decreases the sales of popular consumer goods on the market.
Furthermore, it is evident that nowadays, advertisements are shown on various media platforms from TV, Internet to radio, newspapers. As a result of this, many people buy products based on their frequent appearance on the media instead of the buyers’ actual need. Also, some advertisements feature well-beloved celebrities as well as promote a glamorous lifestyle to persuade people to buy product. Because of that, consumers are led to believe that buying such product would make them as successful and happy as their idol. For example, in Chanel’s latest fragrance commercial, which starred the famous actress Keira Knightley as a boisterous guest in a fancy party in Paris, has attracted a lot of attention, thus boosted the sales of the product.
In conclusion, in my personal view, in today’s society, advertising has a big impact on the overall sales of common consumer goods.
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- Some people think it is more important for government to spend public money on promoting healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'goods'' or 'good's'?
Suggestion: goods'; good's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in most cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41754385965 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0800862591 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585964912281 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6913511581 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.285714286 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179666918958 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605540250847 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376282465636 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117281468322 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330877323532 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.