Today large shopping centers and supermarkets are common than small local shop. Is this a negative or positive development?
Nowadays, enormous commercial centers and supermarkets are more prevalent than traditional shop. In my opinion, while this development plays a vital in our society and brings a lot of benefits for customers such as convenience, I am convinced that this evolution has also a disadvantageous influence in our life as infectious diseases like covid-19.
To begin with, it has been widely demonstrated that giant shopping mall and stores benefit for clients such as convenience. In reality, the restaurants, clothe and shoes shops and recreational areas and so on are combined in a skyscraper. It is undoubted that this development help to shorten, namely the distance and time, and economize a great deal of money. As a result, customers can make purchase a lot of goods in the same place, it is extraordinarily convenient. A good example of this is the biggest shopping center named Vincom. Appealing a huge number of consumers owing to its convenience.
On the other hand, it is obvious that large shopping centers result in the increase of infectious diseases such as covid-19. In the fact that enormous trade centers and supermarkets attract many consumers because of its convenience. This is reason why this disease may dramatically rise. This can be evidenced by a shopping mall in Hanoi city which houses many goods. The city’s authority found out one patient suffering from covid-19, and at approximately five days later, this landmark have to be closed. As a consequence, this gives rise to a serious problem to our society.
In conclusion, from my perspective, this development has both advantageous and disadvantageous influences in today’s life. Whereas giant commercial centers benefit for consumers like its convenience, they trigger some issues about infectious disease like covid-19.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31468531469 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18568120219 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2436114275 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269628330468 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091962328126 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696066029788 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163612513766 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402708006999 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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