Today many countries import food from different parts of the world. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
Due to globalization, trade is flourishing and many consumers goods are being traded across the globe. It has been noticed that, from various corner of the world, even food is being exported to numerous nations. Like a coin with two sides, even this development has its own merits and demerits. As far as i am concerned, all though this change could have some disadvantages but the advantages what it has to offer is far more outweighing.
To being with, exchange of food materials provides with the privilege of tasting different types of exotic delicacies and fruits to all people of the world. Some special eatables are only produced in specific regions and importing that food gives all other nations an opportunity to relish and consume the same. For example, kiwi fruit cannot be produced in India, but all Indians can still enjoy the fruit, thanks to trade. Moreover, this trend gives the poor, developing countries an opportunity to earn foreign exchange by selling their rare products to the world. This eventually helps those countries economically.
On contrary, this exchange could be health hazardous. As those food materials has to be transported over a long distances, they are preserved with the help of preservatives to increase their shelf life. These preservatives are sometimes carcinogenic and could cause dreadful diseases like cancer. Thus, it is a potential threat to the health of the people. Furthermore, the buyer country could lose its precious currency to the foreign nation, weaken itself financially.
To conclude with, all though it is not a healthy option to eat the imported food, but availability of the food throughout the year to the buyer nation and economic stability to the seller nation is some of the vital benefits that cannot be ignored. However, drawbacks of this trend could be slowly solved with the help of proper measures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08766233766 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77135637815 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1134320512 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9375 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219841358291 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654064260478 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461554881641 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125564013008 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478158417834 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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