In today, more and more people changing their career during their work life? What is reason behind this? Is it positive or negative development for society?
Due to rapid increase in globalisation which offer a Vast amount of jobs to people who is why majority of masses switch their old jobs with new ones. However, there are uncountable factors behind these such as earn more wealth and get success in their interested career. On the other hand, these perception have many drawbacks like create unemployment as well as failure among humans.
There are multifarious causes of why people replace their career during their work life and the main is that humans thinks that if they change their work with another jobs than these work will be providing them a huge number of money. The reason is that today a vast majority of people running cat run after wealth. Even though, some people deems that work which they selected at first are not suitable for them because these jobs not only give them low-income but also lots of stress. In other words, some groups of masses replacing their previous jobs with their interest to achieve a higher satisfaction of success and touch the stairs of success. For example, Indian cricket team ex-captain Mahinder Singh Dhoni was doing a job of railway at first but after sometime he left this work and start playing his interest cricket in which he gets so many name and fame become successful as well.
Nevertheless, the phenomena of changing work emission a negative impact on communities and first is that it leads to unemployment the reason is that few people left their jobs to find another better job in which they interested. Moving to left first job, they cannot easily search new ones so that time they become jobless which creates unemployment situations for regions. Furthermore, it is not grunted that masses definitely gain achievement in their like carriers sometimes it is leading to failure. For instance, William Henry, the USA architecture left his job due to his interest in music but he is not be winning success in music industry and he get failure as well as lost his well-paying job of architecture.
In conclusion, although, it is beneficial for humans to replace their work with another one which gives them good facilities and higher income but some extent because it develop a lots of complications for societies which leads to perilous situations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 291, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this perception' or 'these perceptions'?
Suggestion: this perception; these perceptions
...r interested career. On the other hand, these perception have many drawbacks like create unemplo...
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Line 5, column 849, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun name seems to be countable; consider using: 'many names'.
Suggestion: many names
...is interest cricket in which he gets so many name and fame become successful as well. ...
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Line 9, column 611, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... to his interest in music but he is not be winning success in music industry and h...
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Line 9, column 655, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...inning success in music industry and he get failure as well as lost his well-paying...
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Line 13, column 171, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'develops'?
Suggestion: develops
...igher income but some extent because it develop a lots of complications for societies w...
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Line 13, column 179, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...come but some extent because it develop a lots of complications for societies which le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93717277487 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5884268196 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523560209424 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.9008513397 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.076923077 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3846153846 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6153846154 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273775799213 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983811094138 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790650126104 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161178447698 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494695666062 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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