Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert of the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
It is evident that a great number of travelers are choosing their destinations which have extreme conditions such as Sahara, Antarctica. It is often said that these places are a big threat to human life, nevertheless, this also offers an enhanced exposure to live and feel the thrill for the tourists.
To commence with, many people are heading to such extreme places because most of them are bored with visiting similar popular places around the world. A myriad of people desired to see unusual places that bring confidence in them. For example, my uncle has toured almost 80 countries around the globe and now he's planning to go to Nagan Kagan which is a very difficult place to visit in Pakistan. Moreover, some travelers are also seeking new challenges in tourism and that's another reason they want to see these places.
On the contrary, visiting these places can be a threat to one's life. Since there are not several facilities available in terms of transportation, food, medical and others, it could be definitely a high risk to visit these places. Additionally, high temperatures can also affect human life in certain ways owing to the extreme environment which is not familiar to these travelers can certainly cause a life-death. For instance, The Times has reported that a large proportion of the tourists suggested other travelers to not visit these places since they struggled in every aspect of life and therefore, they had a terrible experience.
To recapitulate, while it has been observed that there a growing number of people heading to such places which have difficult conditions, I believe that it could be highly risky to go there with a lack of facilities, nonetheless, it also gives great exposure and mesmerizing experience of thrill.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04778156997 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77109987435 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559726962457 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0490157914 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.454545455 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221546910348 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866879017878 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055416151703 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128773239547 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337833362194 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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