In recent years, it has been observed that compare to past, people are putting on their weight gradually. Rise in the rate of overweight is adversely affecting the daily lifestyle of people in various ways. In this essay, i will put forth the possible causes of this situation and the measures to overcome with this problem.
Researchers insists there are enormous reasons behind getting overweight. Faulty dining and eating habits of children and young people. Consumption of more fried and calorie food item easily attracts the tastbuds of people. Restless schedule of people is most popular reason these days as people hardly find time to relax, they prefer to order food online from restaurants rather than cooking food at home. Also, they don't find time for themselves to look at their fitness and they are turning obese and diabetic, their health is deteriorating.
However, by implementing a good lifestyle in our daily routine can help to deal with this problem. We need to comprehend the value of our life and need to become less materialistic . Looking at current scenario, takeout time for yourself and utilise it wisely. We need to do regular excercises , yoga, walk, play any outdoor sports games of your choice and many more will help to regain our fitness level and make us strong. Simultaneously, it is vital to eat nutritious food and involve more of fresh green vegetable in our daily diet and limiting junk food.
To sum up, overweight is a serious issue, in order to deal with problem, people are required to initate steps and decide what to pick and what to avoid.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9219330855 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54999972634 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635687732342 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5008623063 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5714285714 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203009248803 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057859313196 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701993933247 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12489402802 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682675771138 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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