Today more people are traveling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are benefits of travelling for travellers?
It is obvious that the number of tourists has been increasing in recent years. It seems to me that there are two main reasons leading to this phenomenon and it also could bring benefits to travelers.
Leading to this trend could be the result of two main factors. First, the demand for exploring new places, meeting different people, and experiencing diverse cultures could be one of the reasons. People, especially the young generation, have a thirst for seeing breathtaking views in the world to make their life more meaningful. Second, transportation and tourism service has become more convenient and efficient, which makes traveling no longer difficult, compared to the past. For instance, the appearance of charter flights, guided tours, and package holidays enables people to pay a visit to any country without having a concern about distances or complex procedures.
It is clear that traveling could have positive effects on travelers. Firstly, the most obvious benefit of traveling is having a whale of a time after a long time that people have to suffer from the pressure of their work and lives. By immersing themselves in the breathtaking views, experiencing delectable cuisine in different places, people can get away from it all and recharge their batteries, which plays an important role in their mental health. Second, through traveling, people could raise their awareness of the importance of protecting the natural world. It is obvious that ecotourism and wildlife safari has become more prevalent and caught more attention from travelers, which makes a huge contribution to helping tourists have opportunities to appreciate the aesthetic qualities of the environment.
In conclusion, there are clear reasons why more people are traveling and this could bring advantages to travelers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35789473684 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85532985612 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564912280702 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8853703346 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.461538462 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220377125938 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811786854311 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775802323752 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157400153002 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899345984322 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.