In today’s society, both Western medicine and traditional, complementary forms of medicines are now widely known and used. The effectiveness oft kinds of treatment is determined by the patient's mental attitude towards it.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, medicine’s department of modern time and traditional medicine has rapidly developing. Some people believe that the influence of kinds of treatment is determined by the patient’s mental attitude towards it. But it has two sides.
On one the hand, some doctors do not approach from truth spirit for the patient. In my country’s some hospital get complain people for example, public hospitals. Therefore, most people prefer to choose private hospitals. There are so many large and small private hospitals in my country. People can take service of high quality and they are satisfaction. Also, It the hospitals are with very convenient environment and comfortable.
On the other hand, the public hospitals are too much crowded and there are not enough doctors and other staff. Thus, they are usually very busy and hardworking. Also, the public hospitals are cheaper than the private hospitals and some services of public hospitals are free cost. In my opinion, the public hospital’s doctors are not enough time and, so they can not being kinder for everybody. Thus, people need to understand them. But the privety hospital’s doctors are very nice and they discuss with the patient about treatment.
In conclusion, it is not compare things. Because everybody has different minds. In my opinion, it should not judge and just need to trust for the doctors. They are just doing responsible job and they love to respect for people. If you want to take convinient service, you need to go the private hospitals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22983870968 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89105592205 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540322580645 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0914076662 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.85 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114839293745 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035540830987 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696047062533 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100971996392 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114542041413 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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