In today's world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Investment in scientific research is a thorny issue. Quite a few people reckon that private enterprises should fund and carry out scientific examinations, while others cling to the idea that the authorities finance and conduct scientific study. I believe that this problem has both advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, private companies should pay for and conduct most scientific research. It seems logical that scientific research costs a lot of money to carry out such as building bridges, building schools, and widening transportation. This problem might put the national budget at risk. In addition to this, Ìf the national and local authorities is unable to funds , a variety of scientific study is cancelled. Nevertheless, it is essential that the state should constantly monitor company activities to make firm that they do not cause corruption and provide a high quality of result .
On the other hand, the authorities should finance and carry out scientific research. Statistics have shown that . Many projects funded by private companies have been poorly executed and intentionally misdirected. For instance , in 2013 In Hanoi, there was a bridge that was built less than a year ago and has begun to deteriorate. Sadly enough , there are a number of people who believe that science projects funded and managed by business leaders, puts the reputation of research in danger.
In conclusion, this issue has both advantages and disadvantages . Although the investment in scientific research by private companies can be culprit of the reputation, quality of the results, nourish the national budget.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40711462451 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02028739116 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573122529644 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7510683644 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265669359683 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877436925131 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09048408299 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163637945677 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329031114898 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.