In today's world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In this modern era, private companies instead of the government pay for and do most of the scientific research is a topic of public interest and concern. Although there are positive effects, drawbacks of this are obvious. However, in my opinion, the latter definitely carry more weight than the former.
On the one hand, there are several benefits to private companies paying for and conducting scientific research. Firstly, this action of private companies can help partly in the budget problem of the government. The government will no longer have to bear the economic burden of having to invest in research. They can use that money for emergencies or solving social problems such as poverty, climate change, health care. Secondly, when private companies carry out scientific research, researchers and scientists will be disbursed by these companies faster than the government from which the research will be carried out appear faster and more caring.
However, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks. Firstly, most private companies when conducting scientific research will focus and care about the company's profits. They may do illegal, immoral, unethical things like experimenting on animals such as rabbits, mice and this is inhumane. Since this is done by private companies and can be done in secret, it is difficult for the government to control or censor them all. In addition, poor-quality research products can also harm consumers. Secondly, in order to have high enough capital to pay for scientific research, most private companies must have foreign investments such as international cooperation. Therefore, these studies are hardly able to solve global problems and have no great effect.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential drawbacks of private companies instead of the government paying for and doing most of the scientific research are more significant than the possible benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38360655738 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80096731477 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52131147541 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.136304509 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.625 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387573636466 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132345185641 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122182022328 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282898165693 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038628877852 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.