Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this modern era, working from home or studying at home is a topic of public interest and concern. Although this situation can bring some positive development, negative effects cannot be denied. In my opinion, this trend can bring positive development.
Firstly, adults are working from home and children are studying at home through technologies can help people save a lot of time. It can not be denied that when people work from home, they do not have to go to companies or school to work or learn. They can work or study through technology devices such as mobile phones, laptops, computers, or tablets. Consequently, they can save their time doing another job after completing their work instead of driving from their companies or schools to home. Furthermore, it can help people more relax because they can take a rest at home right after working or learning.
In addition, this trend can help to protect the environment. When people work from home, it can reduce massive vehicles such as motorbikes or cars on the road, which can release the number of greenhouse gases such as CO2 in the atmosphere. This can help reduce air pollution in the world. Moreover, it can help people to protect their health from some respiratory diseases such as cough, hardly breathing or even lung cancer. Making their lives better and also reducing traffic congestion.
In conclusion, many people working or learning from home through modern technology devices can bring some positive developments including saving time and protecting the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0905511811 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64451195628 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531496062992 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.036879879 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3571428571 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268179173673 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11153567557 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782874574978 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186178962438 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589114677111 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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