International sporting events are organised by many nations for various reasons. Some of these events take place every year and many of them are held every 4 years such as The Olympics. There are several drawbacks of organising these sports events for the host countries; nevertheless, advantages are also numerous. Let's examine both pros and cons of these.
In this modern era, host countries' organization of international sporting events is a topic of public interest and concern. While host countries’ organization of international sporting events brings various beneficial aspects, its drawbacks cannot be denied.
On the one hand, host countries of an international sports match will bring a lot of benefits. Firstly, the host countries can improve the national image. If major sports events such as the Olympics are held, the image of that country will be shown on television, from which their country will be famous around the world. It also boosts the economy as more tourists visit the host country to watch the tournament. Secondly, through the organization of these sporting events, the host countries can build international relationships. These international sports events will often have many participating countries so that the host country can get acquainted that they can develop international cooperation later in both economic and political.
On the other hand, there are a number of disadvantages of hosting international sports. Firstly, host countries will be under great pressure on the cost of organizing. For major international tournaments, the host countries have to spend a large amount of money to build the arena and seats for the audience and this must be prepared monthly. Many countries even have to borrow money to build the stadium. Secondly, attracting more tourists to their country to watch the match can also cause undue vandalism. Tourists who come to watch the match can throw garbage on the field even on the street and this will affect the environment of the host country. They will have to do a lot of cleaning after the season ends.
In conclusion, hosting international sports events could bring about certain benefits such as improving national image, building international relationships but its drawbacks like the cost or environmental damage should not be overlooked.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37540453074 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03645422354 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498381877023 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6139137612 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8125 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183892707919 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711054936893 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645109765879 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141594852554 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531783048968 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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