Nowadays, man’s sports shows have a higher frequency in TV channels than women’s. This essay will outline some reasons and presents my preference for this problem.
To begin with, man’s sports shows have been prefered by both genders for decades, so TV channels have to display man’s match than others. Firstly, men bear a characteristic of strength and large boy, so they usually show up these advantages to take the lead in matches. Spectators who enjoy these matches frequently express more contradictional emotions like either excitement or frustration in any confrontation between professional players of both teams. As a result, TV providers desire to obtain a higher view rating as high as possible from watchers, so they must provide man’ sporting shows in higher coverage on TV.
However, actions must be taken as soon as possible to bridge the gap between the unfair issue. Although women teams have earned a series of highest awards from the international competitions they involve in, there is little attention from the public towards their effort during years of working recklessly to obtain invaluable medals for the country. TV channels play a crucial role in spreading these images across the country and arising people’s awareness about the sacrifice of women in sports tournaments, so this offers motivation and love from human beings for these strong women. Additionally, exposure to women’s sporting shows can help other women engage in sports and improve their physical and mental abilities, and subsequently, enhance the quality of life.
In conclusion, I reaffirm that despite having a higher view rating in the exposure of men’s sport on TV, TV channels should increase the number of women’s sports shows because this helps these women receive worthwhile awards from the public.
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Today, sports media have…
Today, sports media have been dominated by sportsmen, leaving sportswomen with very little attention. This essay will outline some reasons and I believe that equal coverage for both sexes is necessary.
The man reason leading to this prejusdice is because of an undeniable fact that sports performed by men are, in many cases, more engaging and fun to watch, spectators will frequently exprience through a roller coaser while enjoying these matches. This is because men are innately stronger, more competitive and more aggressive, which makes their shows seemingly more sensational and dramatic. Therefore, people generally prefer watching men doing sports to women, and the television industry can generate more profits from matches and contests played by men.
However, actions must be taken as soon as possible to bridge the gap about this difference. Although women teams have earned a series of highest awards from the international competitions they involve in, there is little public endorsement towards their achievements and effort during years of working recklessly. TV channels play a crucial role in spreading these images across the country and arising people’s awareness about the sacrifice of women in sports tournaments, so they can earn much more motivation and love from human beings. Moreover, more showing time may attract additional investments from sponsors, which in turn may positively affect wage rates of sportswomen. Additionally, achievements of female sports figures shown on TV can encourage those with potential to embark on their sporting career.
In conclusion, I reaffirm that despite having a higher view rating in the exposure of men’s sport on TV, TV channels should increase the number of women’s sports shows because it can inspire those who wish to pursue sport-related careers and improve the lives of female sportswomen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14930555556 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65377517245 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 288.0 20.2975951904 1419% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1483.0 106.682146367 1390% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 288.0 20.7667163134 1387% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 81.0 7.06120827912 1147% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466949019078 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.466949019078 0.084324248473 554% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323822072261 0.151304729494 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527039386144 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 146.8 13.0946893788 1121% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -220.84 50.2224549098 -440% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 115.6 11.3001002004 1023% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.07 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.2 8.58950901804 258% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 117.2 10.1190380762 1158% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 10.7795591182 529% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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