Topic 1: With the pressures on today’s young people to succeed academically, some people believe that non-academic subjects at school (e.g: physical education and cookery) should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate wholly on academic subjects.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People have different views about the subjects of youngsters at school. While some agree with the idea that vocational courses, such as physical education and should be replaced in the curriculum, I disagree with that point of view.
There is a variety of reasons why non-academic subjects should not be replaced fully by academic courses. Firstly, non-academic classes gain a wealth of practical skills and work experience more than academic classes. This means that the more learners face up with realistic work or obstacles, the sooner they will be qualified workers. By doing this, they are likely to save a great deal of time studying at school without committing 4 years as academic students undertake. Secondly, vocational training helps students make money as soon as possible, especially, with low-income families. In other words, after graduation from school, they will get decent jobs in order to support their families, which puts less pressure on the budget of their parents.
In addition, there are also many advantages why non-academic subjects should-be taken into consideration. Firstly, if students excessively stick to academic ones, they will get involved in the sedentary lifestyle. It is because that if students spend many hours sitting at school, then they will not have opportunities to take part in outdoor activities like physical education. As a result, when they maintain a long time to learn academic courses without any physical actions, then they intend to passive lifestyle. Secondly, thanks to non-academic subjects, it will meet a balance of labor markets. For instance, in Canada or Japan, these countries often employ unskilled workforce to do manual ones. Therefore, it could lead these nations to get enough employees annually.
In conclusion, while there are some drawbacks to non-academic subjects, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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- Topic 1: With the pressures on today’s young people to succeed academically, some people believe that non-academic subjects at school (e.g: physical education and cookery) should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate wholly on ac 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45733788396 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88292689085 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627986348123 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6138078556 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.9375 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228567413202 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753480955409 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566656390339 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148706029671 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565761730125 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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