Topic 24: Some people say that everyone can create art, but others think only those who are talented or have special skills can create art. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
It is believed that the work of art could be created by people no matter who they are, while some argue that just gifted and skillful people are allowed to make the art. From my perspective, there is no boundary preventing someone from making artworks.
On the one hand, people who are truly talented in some certain fields of art are highly appreciated. Firstly, creating a spectacular artwork is not as simple as we may think. In fact, it takes a large amount of time and demands the artists to be always patient, creative and also hard-working until they complete their whole works. Secondly, there are now many exhibitions held to demonstrate the amazing works of art from talented people. This is also a chance for them to transmit the ideas and internal value of what their works stand for to others.
On the other hand, people have an equal right to create what they desire, and the work of art is not the exception. Criticism should be stopped when someone takes part in the work of art. Although their works are not good enough to receive a compliment, they can fulfill their wish and enjoy the achievement, which let them relax and think positively. In some nations, for instance, thanks to the encouragement of the authorities for every people to make artworks, the number of lawbreakers reduces yearly. In addition, creating things is beneficial to ordinary people, especially the young. When engaging to make the artwork, they tend to be more aware and cleverer since it promotes the development both sides of their brains and the cognitive ability.
In conclusion, despite some arguments about who should create art, both talented and untalented people have the same opportunity to produce their artworks.
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- Topic 24: Some people say that everyone can create art, but others think only those who are talented or have special skills can create art. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92808219178 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60453029612 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568493150685 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5178167421 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.785714286 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257001061139 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920746523406 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844976090766 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180389025944 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435343703162 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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