The majority of fossil fuels are used in a myriad of countries as a fundamental energy source. But some nations have motivated their society to be a green energy consumer. I do believe that the benefits of this development are more than drawbacks.
First of all, green energy plays a vital role in protecting the environment and human life. Compare to fossil fills which emit a high amount of greenhouse gases and leads to rising global temperature, renewable energy as alternative sources emit little toxic gases or pollutant into the air. Furthermore, by using renewable resources like wind and solar, people can help decrease the prevalence of respiratory and cardiac health issues, which caused by the burning of fossil fuels.
The everlasting green energy is the second positive point of this alternative source. Since renewable energy technology uses resources such as water and solar strait from the environment to generate power and these sources would not run out through the time. Despite this, conventional energies like oil and gas will eventually run out or be too expensive cause these are not infinitive. In other words, the process of creating energy from fossil has been taken millions of years, thus slow decay rate of this source is time-consuming and limited, however, the water and solar are unlimited and they never end.
In conclusion, while fossil fuel is one of the main energy sources which have been utilized over centenaries, Renewable energy is a newfound alternate to this. Some people are encouraged to be green energy users and I feel that this had more benefits than disavantages. I think that if the majority of governments convert their common plant power to secure energy, we could inhabit in a safer place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, thus, while, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07291666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70571231793 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590277777778 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3806406586 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.384615385 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361894165057 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126125169257 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733510352259 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218096166444 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327583186981 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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