Owing to a problem in which too much money is spent on pets, several people believe that they are not necessarily worth a high-spending. I completely agree that this can have consequences on our physical and mental well-being.
Firstly, the fact that money should not be spent more on animals and birds is that pets are not alive too long, while this budget can be allocated to impoverished people that suffering starve and destitute.Furthermore, poverty not only affects our society but also can affect our health. Hence, this can increase health risks and chronic diseases due to a lack of insurance and access to medical care among lower-income families and homeless people. Thus, instead of spending money on pets customers or toys, if individuals break down their budget to help the deprived area, indirectly they are boosting their health care.
Another point to consider is that having more attention to pets by allocating a myriad of expenditures might lead to depression in the long term. In other words, instead of overspending on animals or birds that may be injured or lost, this budget can be allocated to adopting orphans or abused babies. In this way, bot adopters and babies will be faced with remarkable benefits. In the long term, the baby will be part of their family. Also, by adopting a baby the rate of live expectancy might be growing between old people.
In conclusion, having pets does help people in need through friendship and companionship, however, they are not worth allocating too much money owing to this can be affected on our health in the long-term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...ple that suffering starve and destitute.Furthermore, poverty not only affects our society b...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...will be faced with remarkable benefits. In the long term, the baby will be part of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97378277154 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8517346811 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9171040614 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.727272727 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128523242561 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529859389628 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431517976127 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890534381565 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316885272985 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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