Topic: Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals
can tackle these problems.
These days, people are tending to move to live in the metropolis thus leading to
overpopulation, especially in urban. Overpopulation of urban areas, therefore, is one of
the most pressing issues that governments are trying to find effective solutions to tackle.
The exponential population growth indirectly causes traffic congestion. Traffic
congestion can be a consequence of the traditional work shift patterns, usually, from
Monday to Friday, from 9 am to 5 pm. In this time, the commuters enter the roadway
simultaneously, causing rush hour. For example, the comfortable living conditions in
the big cities make rural people move to live so that they can improve their life.
However, the more population is increasing, the worse traffic is getting. In the 90s, there
are many wide and large paths in Hanoi. Nonetheless, after urbanization, roads are
more and more crowded and congested. Overpopulation also causes an increase in the
cost of living in urban areas. As the number of the population increase, the demand for
accommodation further rises. Therefore, most of the costs will increase and even
numerous low-income people do not have the ability to pay their own and family's living
expenses. For example, nowadays, there are many poor workers in Hanoi who cannot
have a comfortable and fulfilling life because the cost of living is expensive in the city.
The solution to these problems is that the government should raise the living standard
of the rural population and improve the infrastructure in rural areas as well. Accordingly,
people do not have to migrate to make a living in the metropolis as well as we can limit
the traffic jam. Moreover, the government needs to enact the one-child policy to restrict
population growth.
Overall, population growth will have a negative impact on people's life if the government
does not rapidly act to resolve this problem.
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- Topic Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33442622951 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03259370231 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550819672131 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7306990037 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7058823529 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144454068005 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432207284463 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518285583965 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0414883047736 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550388785818 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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