Topic: In some countries, old people are highly valued and in some countries, young people are more valuable. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
There is a variety of comments about the importance of the elder and the youth in these days. Some countries realize that the old should stand higher social positions, while others believed that the young should gain greater significance. However, in my opinion, both of above mentioned generations play influential roles in contributing to the growth of society, therefore we should have equal respect for them.
On the one hand, the aged has a number of characteristics that hardly any youngster has. First of all, the elder own a plentiful source of hands-on experience. In specific, a long period of time working for one or more settings, of course, enables them to accumulate specialized knowledge and critical soft skills. As a result, they have abilities to keep calm to address any sudden and unexpected problems in their work and lives. Secondly, senior citizens apprehend many priceless lessons to limit mistakes, while the later generation is much more impulsive than their elder counterparts in decision-making process. This enables the old to easily make better judgments and decisions. Moreover, they can also complete all tasks smoothly due to their greater patience. Last but not least, it is beneficial that previous people are solid basement for next generation when younger people encounter difficulties. In fact, the elder frequently is a good example for the young to follow, which is particular motivation for youngster to show their abilities and performance in progress of their country.
On the other hand, the value of young generation should never be ignored as well. It is undeniable that gaining access to latest technology enables the young to increase their creativity and flexibility which are a demand for recruitment in modern society. Besides, above abilities, combined with self-actualization, stimulates the youth to make latest breakthroughs in many fields. In contrast, senior citizens who are considered as conservative people and always stick to obsolete methods are responsible for decrease in productivity. In addition, youngsters who have overwhelming performance of physical health may undertake night shifts and adjust to the change of work environment quickly when companies could be overloaded.
To sum up, I believe that senior citizens are good decision-makers as they are full of experience and patience, while younger generation is dynamic energy that drives productivity in workplace. Accordingly, both generations are equally importance for the development of nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'make the latest'.
Suggestion: make the latest
...-actualization, stimulates the youth to make latest breakthroughs in many fields. In contra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in contrast, in fact, of course, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2143.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49487179487 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11112296889 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592307692308 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1663312937 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.789473684 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5263157895 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1052631579 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0966758126128 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276919705095 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333788710926 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0546354591171 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217496115399 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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