Topic: Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals.
Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is a fact that more than 70% land in the world is used for human's requirements. While I agree that spaces to plant vegetables, build modern infrastructure cannot be missed, I also believe that people should save land for other animals.
To begin with, environment can be polluted intensely if more factories are built. Many industrial companies have dumped sewage and litters into the sea, rivers , soil, and even release toxic gases to the air which affects both our health and other animals. For example, formusa is a company producing iron and steel , was reflected to leave dirty chemical substance to the sea and that killed thousands of marine creature in 2017.
In addition, narrowing down the land for wildlife means that there will be less places for other species to live. They can suffer from various threats such as deforestation that is caused to cultivate vegetables, build house and factories. Recently, the Hanoi news has reported that the main reason causing the death of numerous animals in Vietnam each year is because human destroy their shelters.
In conclusion, it seems to me that would be wrong to restrict the land for wildlife and human should limit their doings to animals's shelter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... sewage and litters into the sea, rivers , soil, and even release toxic gases to t...
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Line 4, column 316, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...sa is a company producing iron and steel , was reflected to leave dirty chemical s...
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Line 6, column 76, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun places is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...d for wildlife means that there will be less places for other species to live. They ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0197044335 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5414119184 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689655172414 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6752830925 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.222222222 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210612467172 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847725530919 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623978906436 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125697973831 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597464692464 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.